If you make more videos like this, & make a series out of them, may I make two suggestions: 1)More interaction between your character & the antagonist (the creeper watching in the video.) - - - And 2) Lose anything that's not pertinent to the video's storyline (hint: what's playing on the laptop.) Otherwise, this is greatly intriguing video like I said at the beginning and I hope to see more in what could be a series! Take care!